This isn't the most amazing thing ive heard.
thats basically it. It has a slow melody and things pop in every now and then. Try this song once more.
This isn't the most amazing thing ive heard.
thats basically it. It has a slow melody and things pop in every now and then. Try this song once more.
I hear what you are saying; my first cut doesn't do the justice of the original song. I hope that one day I'll get back to this song once again with a more vibrant take.
wow.
this surly put me in a trance. there isn't very much to improve so ure off the hook for bad news.
Whew! *Wipes forehead* Thanks for the review!
continue.
but, you shouldn't post demos like this. i love this though, but it can't be used so you shouldn't post it. 5/5. i want to see the finished version. but there is one problem, it is a bit repetitve so work on that.
How do you mean? Thnaks!! yes ofc, i will make more variation to the complete version :)
good.
the improvments have all been made. this is a perfect song haha.
THANKS lol
ooo nice lyrics
fuckin nice lyrics. i really like this track. this does hav one problem though, the bridge is a bit awful. try agian on that and this will be an amazing track. check some of my song too, i dont got rap though haha.
glad you liked the lyrics man, I'm no good when it comes to mastering or anything like that, I usually try throwing some effects on a track with mixed results. I'll be sure to check your stuff out thanks for the review.
This isn't music.
no. I can't really say this is music. BUT there are some decent things about the song(no zero for you today) the buildup was a bit slow, might wanna work on that. also the quality is a bit terrible. try again, and try with better quality and build it up more.
Dude this is :)
its progressive HOUSE :P
Look @ Deadmau5, most of the electro listeners know m :)
Btw, this is high quality :P
or else youve got yourself some bad headphones/speakers :)
ekk..
the drums are off like very badly. so is the guitar. the only thing that is AMAZING ABOUT this song is the singer. check out my tracks, i like metal.
to be honest once i submitted it, i had many versions of the song...
and then at the end the stupid off time drums came in~
and i was like "FML!!!!"
how do i re-submit T__T
uhhhh...
this isn't the best i've ever heard, but you can try again with a song that makes sense. the sounds are a bit, uhh shitty. please try again.
lol sense isn't my thing =P
hmmmmm
great song i was rockin to this. but could you check out some of my songs? i kno it sounds like spam... haha. i liked the first minute of the song alot. 5/5
thx man my first 9 tell ur friends and help me get a 3! ill check your work also have the not brtoken one up soon tomoz becoz you cant submit 3 in one day lol
pretty awesome
sweet man. this has a repetitive rythem so you might want to fix that
aight i might change it up soon
im not done with it yet
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